Converting attention into interest is really the sole purpose of copywriting.
How you approach that task in your marketing efforts can make a huge difference in the results.
In this MarketingExperiments Blog post, we’ll look at how some tactical copy changes increased one company’s clickthrough rate by 37% to help you craft effective copy of your own.
But first, here are a few snippets on the test.
Background: Company selling audio equipment and accessories.
Goal: To increase clickthrough rate.
Research Question: Which email copy approach will generate the highest clickthrough rate?
Test Design: A/B/C variable cluster split test
In the control, the MECLABS research team hypothesized the email utilized a headline that was not immediately clear, thus undermining the value of the offer.
Here is a simple breakdown of the differences in the treatments:
- Treatment 1′s email tweaked the headline to focus on the aesthetics and performance value of the product.
- Treatment 2′s headline was centered on the overall value proposition of the product.
While both treatments produced a lift, Treatment 2 saw the highest with a relative increase in clickthrough rate of 37%.
What you need to understand
The copy in emails is often subdued to a lot of outside artificial pressure.
There’s pressure in marketing to be unique, clever and any other adjective you can think of here that fits.
But there is only one pressure that should matter to you – delivering value.
If you craft copy that is relevant, direct, and most importantly, honest about what your products claims it can offer customers, then you are well on your way improving performance.
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